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It’s week 154 of Saturday Centus and time once again to
write some mini-fiction as part of this fun and challenging literary meme by the
incomparable Jenny Matlock. So if you
have a little time and one hundred words you aren’t using at the moment, you
need to write them down along with this week’s prompt “It was the summer of
1974.” Then post them to Jenny’s blog,
off on my tangent, and share them with your fellow Centusians. I have entitled this week’s post:
War Is Hell
It was the summer of 1974.
The sun blazed overhead as Stevens and I slogged through the
tall grass.
Our mission: find
Charlie and take him out.
The rat-a-tat-a-tat sounds of machine guns echoed through
the trees.
Charlie was nearby.
Smoke wafted by carrying the unmistakable whiff of burnt
flesh.
We took positions behind a big rock beside the trail and waited.
Minutes passed like hours.
Finally our waiting was rewarded.
Adrenaline kicked in.
Leaping from our position we caught Charlie by surprise.
“Rat-a-tat-a-tat-a-tat!
We got you Charlie!!”
“You win. My mom
wants me home now anyway. Dad’s barbecuing
chicken.”
“Okay, same time tomorrow, Charlie!”
In the summer of 1974 I was a mere 12 years of age, playing
army, building forts, riding bikes, and having
fun like all kids did back then. I was generally
oblivious to the madness surrounding the pointless and inane war in Vietnam and
the corrupt abuses of power surrounding Watergate. Wow, I am sure glad we learned our lessons
from that genuinely absurd time in our history!
Who would want to live through
that again, eh?
Hmmmmm.
“Some parents say it is toy guns that make boys warlike. But give a boy a rubber duck and he will seize its neck like the butt of a pistol and shout "Bang!"”
George F. Will
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Long time since I read your work and still it has the sharp edge. Nice twist at the end today! I was older then but not sure I understood the war better than a 12 year old!
ReplyDeleteHow sad when that innocence fades.
ReplyDeleteFabulous! You had me right there in the jungles of Vietnam and then pulled me from the real bloodshed with a fun twist. I remember that time well. Yeah, too bad about those lessons.
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You really got me on this one. I thought it was about some war story. Good job.
ReplyDeleteI was sure you were referring to Viet Nam. Great twist at the end. I truly enjoyed reading this.
ReplyDeleteGreat job on this, Tom. Really clever.
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I know what you mean! I can still remember playing outside and hearing Walter Cronkite on the television, and not really understanding just what all was happening....thinking life was just perfect, everywhere.
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This was really good writing.
I love the way you twist and turn your stories.
I bet you're great at Twister.