tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7657856166406982646.post2847234131694126171..comments2023-10-30T08:24:26.137-07:00Comments on Sophisticated Lunacy: "Goodbye Daddy," A Saturday CentusTgoettehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06850303812765307075noreply@blogger.comBlogger31125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7657856166406982646.post-70731391592016254352010-06-06T20:33:42.225-07:002010-06-06T20:33:42.225-07:00Love it! So when does the book come out and will y...Love it! So when does the book come out and will you autograph a copy for me?Marlahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18000815937078399278noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7657856166406982646.post-29546987742005496842010-05-25T15:13:13.156-07:002010-05-25T15:13:13.156-07:00Well darn! Now we all have to quit writing! Wo...Well darn! Now we all have to quit writing! Wow. This was really amazing. And you get nervous about sharing? For real? You have such a true and sure voice...I cannot imagine that you are not filled with the confidence your finely crafted words portray!<br /><br />Thank you for participating.<br /><br />Game on!Jennyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12462124067637610359noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7657856166406982646.post-22306803190243580402010-05-25T14:27:00.074-07:002010-05-25T14:27:00.074-07:00Looks like a fine start. Great practice also, lear...Looks like a fine start. Great practice also, learning to cull and make each word worthwhile.Midlife Roadtripperhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06700277803842883251noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7657856166406982646.post-19532093678796494402010-05-25T09:31:34.397-07:002010-05-25T09:31:34.397-07:00Great story! It's hard to tell a story within ...Great story! It's hard to tell a story within 100 words, and yet you did in such a nice style.Sarahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05246393318938411419noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7657856166406982646.post-1934726131830679402010-05-25T03:58:39.575-07:002010-05-25T03:58:39.575-07:00Amazing, I loved itAmazing, I loved itCaroljshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07754049247944556846noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7657856166406982646.post-58825516407126278102010-05-24T19:52:51.228-07:002010-05-24T19:52:51.228-07:00Hey, glad you joined in the fun, you fit nicely (o...Hey, glad you joined in the fun, you fit nicely (o:Vicki/Jakehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11388688356180736777noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7657856166406982646.post-65948605021727705442010-05-24T13:00:32.032-07:002010-05-24T13:00:32.032-07:00That was brilliant thank you for sharing cant wait...That was brilliant thank you for sharing cant wait to see your next offeringTracyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17104766436816377485noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7657856166406982646.post-71625612853354406972010-05-24T07:59:54.780-07:002010-05-24T07:59:54.780-07:00Very well done!Very well done!Mister Jennyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12503825486791695037noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7657856166406982646.post-7415544801519178772010-05-23T22:01:05.749-07:002010-05-23T22:01:05.749-07:00Wow - excellent piece of writing. Definitely kept...Wow - excellent piece of writing. Definitely kept me interested enough to read all the way to the end, and wishing there was more.Marlenehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14877001080913199818noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7657856166406982646.post-37772998111079750942010-05-23T21:45:33.190-07:002010-05-23T21:45:33.190-07:00Hi Tom! Wow...you are an awesome writer. Definitel...Hi Tom! Wow...you are an awesome writer. Definitely keep it up. I stopped by your blog because I saw that you are a new follower of mine! Thanks so much! I really appreciate it. I'm assuming you stumbled across my blog from Jenny Matlock's? Very cool. And again...you are a fantastic writer! Start checking out all the writer sites and blogs, and start submitting! :)BECKYhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15184458949017900541noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7657856166406982646.post-68292095091773133192010-05-23T17:28:47.935-07:002010-05-23T17:28:47.935-07:00Wow, that was good. "The dingy air of povert...Wow, that was good. "The dingy air of poverty" is a GREAT line. I know exactly what you mean, yet it didn't take you a lot of words to show me. Awesome!Tinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08925730745204736744noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7657856166406982646.post-28893147251442059042010-05-23T12:48:57.184-07:002010-05-23T12:48:57.184-07:00This is beautiful! I'm glad to see a poem bec...This is beautiful! I'm glad to see a poem because I have been thinking about the same format! Your work is very visual and sensual. That is what makes a poem and good poem. Thanks!cj Schlottmanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18217936774632262633noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7657856166406982646.post-19379880728227865382010-05-23T08:39:47.429-07:002010-05-23T08:39:47.429-07:00I could taste and smell the essence...very nice......I could taste and smell the essence...very nice...Peace and blessingsjeff campbellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17775235800381700596noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7657856166406982646.post-57810327531933064472010-05-23T08:18:09.725-07:002010-05-23T08:18:09.725-07:00Perfect!
Writing prompts have been great for ge...Perfect! <br /><br />Writing prompts have been great for getting me to step outside of my comfort zone. So glad that you decided to take a whirl!http://howtobecomeacatladywithoutthecats.blogspot.comhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02888838201074339916noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7657856166406982646.post-50494795849318627822010-05-23T07:28:13.975-07:002010-05-23T07:28:13.975-07:00Wow! This was fantastic. It really hit home for me...Wow! This was fantastic. It really hit home for me, I just visited our family farm in Mississippi for the first time in almost 30 years. And your words brought it all back. Beautifully written. KathyKathttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12396548112800738809noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7657856166406982646.post-59235559190546079732010-05-23T07:14:00.937-07:002010-05-23T07:14:00.937-07:00That's great, Tom. I like the idea of using a...That's great, Tom. I like the idea of using a phrase in a essay. I'll have to check this out.ReformingGeekhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17990465686765948682noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7657856166406982646.post-4061680819625056522010-05-23T06:43:01.774-07:002010-05-23T06:43:01.774-07:00No reason for you to be nervous, because this was ...No reason for you to be nervous, because this was fantastic. Loved the descriptions and the scents, they really painted a great picture of this! :)Samihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01277456797902827017noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7657856166406982646.post-86010070967993883402010-05-23T03:51:42.160-07:002010-05-23T03:51:42.160-07:00I absolutely detect just a hint of Steinbeck. It&...I absolutely detect just a hint of Steinbeck. It's fresh, tangible......and tugs at the heart strings. Very well done!!!People Who Know Me Would Say:https://www.blogger.com/profile/04621641188403948733noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7657856166406982646.post-82142293899963047252010-05-23T02:09:37.310-07:002010-05-23T02:09:37.310-07:00Wow! This is an amazing piece! I love poetry from ...Wow! This is an amazing piece! I love poetry from the heart! Welcome to Jenny's!Good to find your blog!jfb57https://www.blogger.com/profile/17876700842985406565noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7657856166406982646.post-36181539097976319452010-05-23T00:46:45.910-07:002010-05-23T00:46:45.910-07:00Welcome to our mad world with Jenny! What a great ...Welcome to our mad world with Jenny! What a great first contribution!easternsparklehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17655745434901079268noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7657856166406982646.post-16247423979040045682010-05-22T23:40:59.490-07:002010-05-22T23:40:59.490-07:00Wow, your story is awesome. It has a warm, nostalg...Wow, your story is awesome. It has a warm, nostalgic feel. Your first attempt? Amazing, Tgo.<br />Thanks for the plug re Jenny's blog. I'm intimidated, but I'll go check her site out.<br />Cheers, :)<br />RobynRawknrobyn.blogspot.comhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15997241410192066577noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7657856166406982646.post-84736410333991384072010-05-22T20:57:44.375-07:002010-05-22T20:57:44.375-07:00What a very thought-provoking post- I loved the im...What a very thought-provoking post- I loved the images that your words invoked....<br /><br />Wonderful job!<br /><br />SherriKCSherrihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15197104891128238863noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7657856166406982646.post-25021416410403790832010-05-22T20:09:33.932-07:002010-05-22T20:09:33.932-07:00Great job, Tom! You wasted not one word...very vi...Great job, Tom! You wasted not one word...very vivid descriptions. Hope to see more of these. We may yet hit the big time...And I knew you when.... ~TomTomShttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16718198770348083155noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7657856166406982646.post-49000883295200166042010-05-22T19:43:33.922-07:002010-05-22T19:43:33.922-07:00I felt this, I heard daddy playing and he was good...I felt this, I heard daddy playing and he was good and I smiled at the thoughts of heaven. I am so glad you played along. I will be back. I like what I see!Terrahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12112479764398508654noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7657856166406982646.post-23668388578681262302010-05-22T18:56:37.666-07:002010-05-22T18:56:37.666-07:00Nicely done, sir. I do believe you are ready for ...Nicely done, sir. I do believe you are ready for the big time.Cheeseboyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02358419997798632644noreply@blogger.com